What time is it? It's time to share a Poetry Friday poem from The Poetry Friday Anthology! We're in Week 28 of our weekly sharing of poetry every Friday all year long. What is the theme? Books! This week's sample poem comes from second grade and is a fun poem written in two voices. Here's how it begins and ends. You'll have to look in the book on p. 134 to read the WHOLE poem. [If you haven't already, get your copy of the book here.]
I Might Go to Mars
by Juanita Havill
Me: “See you later, Mom.
I’m going to the moon.”
Mom: “And I’m fixing lunch.
Be back by noon.”
...
Mom shrugs and frowns,
gives me that look.
So I tell her my secret:
I travel by book.
Take 5 Strategies
1. Double-check that students know that Mars is in outer space, a detail that makes a big difference in this poem. Then read the poem aloud, using a high pitched youthful voice for the lines for Me and a lower, authoritative voice for the lines for Mom and your normal voice for the final stanza.
2. Invite students to read the Me lines in unison. If possible, display the words of the poem to assist students.
3. For discussion: Where would you like to go if you could go absolutely anywhere?
4. This is a poem written for two voices or characters as if it were a conversation. Consider how the ending rhymes (moon/noon; so/go; look/book) help make what could be simply dialogue a rhyming poem.
5. For another poem for two voices, look for “The Way You Sound To You / To Me” by John Grandits (4th Grade, Week 13).
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Posted for Juanita Havill (whose computer wasn't cooperating):
ReplyDeleteHaven't you always wanted to go to Mars? Actually Saturn was my dream destination when I was young, but we are learning that Mars is much more hospitable. I wrote this poem when I was pondering all of the ways we humans travel, and books have taken me to amazing places all of my life.
--Juanita Havill
"I travel by book": what a great notion to put in kids' heads as we enter Spring Break for many (with many being unable to travel anywhere due to family budget or parents' work). Ask them the #3 question . . . and then connect them with books that take them there!!
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